Saturday, February 16, 2008

夜空

最近日未落 月已升

念乡有余 情绪升温

交错、复杂 好比繁星

然则天空是空的 冷冰冰

该如何排除

顿时茫然无所从

愿 偶日商房踪

                                                                   16Feb2008, 屋子前院的月亮

4 comments:

Victoria Ho said...

very poetic ...

HighlyFavoured Pearl said...

Wow you're poem is getting better. But can you explain what is "商房"?

Thanks. Btw, you are not alone, Hui!
I am with you, friend. Keep in touch. Email me your msn name.

hui khoon tan said...

still got lots to learn, i was teaching my sec pupils to write so got to write one and show them..

hui khoon tan said...

"商房“指内心中的某一处